"Not really the place we've been led to expect, is it?"
Writer: John Binns
Format: Short Story
Released: December 2003
Printed in: Short Trips: Steel Skies 14
Featuring: Fourth Doctor, Romana II, Adric
Synopsis
There are many places that most of us can never see: places that are sheltered, locked away, cordoned off from the outside world. But to the Doctor, and those who travel with him in his TARDIS, there is no such thing as a locked door. Anywhere in space and time is open to them to visit – even if sometimes it might be better to leave such places well alone.
Steel Skies is a collection of stories based in enclosed and artificial environments: places constructed to keep the dangers of the universe outside, perhaps, or to keep their inhabitants locked in. It is divided into four sections, each exploring a different kind of confinement:
Section One, Flight, comprises four tales of travellers who left their homes for far-away destinations – to explore, to start a new life, or to fight for the survival of their species.
Section Two, Frontiers, explores the corridors, living quarters and ventilation shafts of four futuristic environments – designed to shelter men, women and children from harsh natural forces, or from the threat of nuclear war.
Section Three, Incarceration, tells four stories of punishment and imprisonment, from San Francisco's infamous Alcatraz, to the cage of a flightless angel in the dilapidated ruins of Heaven.
Section Four, Isolation, deals with the loneliness and despair of being cut off from the world outside, by physical or mental incapacity, by the ravages of war, or caught between destinations aboard the TARDIS itself.
A recurring theme in all four sections is the effect of the Doctor's arrival in these enclosed environments – sometimes positive, sometimes less so.
Verdict
O, Darkness a pretty average story to get me back on track in continuing my way through the Steel Skies edition of Short Trips. This was an intriguing setup as in my head when the story opened with Adric I immediately assumed this would be a Fifth Doctor outing, but it was actually set during the events of the E-Space trilogy! I think that’s a good idea as there’s definitely grounds for exploration of that universe and there’s certainly plenty of manoeuvring with the timeline. This was set between State of Decay and Warriors’ Gate which I enjoyed because we see two very different companions at two very different points in their life as companion. For Romana, she’s already able to challenge the Doctor because she’s a fellow Time Lord but on top of that she’s also been travelling with him a long time now and for more than one regeneration! It’s no surprise that Adric felt essentially relegated to the background and the shadows within the Structure as it was basically left to the Time Lords to try and fix the situation within the Structure. That was a decent setting but I don’t think there was anywhere near enough clarity or description concerning it. I know that we’re in E-Space and so things aren’t quite as we know them and ambiguity can be good in some instances, but I don’t think this was it. I’m not even convinced it was ambiguous I just think it was lacking in explanation. J was a bit of a weird character and I found the dynamic of a perspective shift halfway through the story from Adric to the Doctor and Romana a little off putting. I would have liked to keep things from Adric’s point of view as whilst I’m not a big fan of his character as a companion in the slightest, I do think he’s troubled and getting some internal insight at this early point in his time on the TARDIS would have been good. We got a little bit so it was odd to have that just change drastically. That’s not to say I’m not a fan of the Fourth Doctor and Romana, but it was just strange. I can’t believe I’m saying I wanted more Adric! His annoyance at being stuck within the Structure was good and should have stayed with the duration. The Doctor going over the same thing time and time again was annoying him as well which was amusing and I could perfectly see the Fourth Doctor doing that. Forty times up and down the same character. The anger he showed towards J for not confirming the existence of the cassettes felt a tad out of place and I was glad that Romana confronted him a little on that. I thought the way they physically got out of the Structure and opened the darkness allowing the light in was a bit bland. I’m not sure it was wholly exciting either. There needed a bit of an adrenaline boost into the story which is a shame to say as I try to see the best in every adventure. Romana was nice in comforting J and preparing him to exit the comfort of the Structure taking it step by step. He’d been confined for a year so it was always going to be a tough task to restore some semblance of normality. Overall, an interesting setting and a very strong placement in the timeline, but this needed more.
Rating: 5/10



















